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 [13楼]  作者:songdl  发表时间: 2004/01/28 17:40

回复:Who are you ? Do you know I?

Hi! old Z brother . Good the Spring Festivaland happy new year!  I don't want  be your rival in love. The intresting poem what you wrote  is so good ,so wonderful that I have to do that. My English is very poor.I dont' know how to write a poem for sure.But I do it yet for the reason I like your poem. understand?

 

 

Who are you?Do you know I
I am her lover and she is mine,
Anything she want'nt hear
and one word to you she can't said

Who are you?Do you know I
I am her lover and she is mine
Outside is very cold
She is willing for me,not for you

Who are you?Do you know I
I am her lover and she is mine
Beautiful scenes away you
We are happy and gay

Who are you?Do you know I
I am her lover and she is mine
All is sunshine,all is bright
She around me and I am on her side

Who are you?Do you know I
I am her lover and she is mine
wodnderful time we have had
Never  lonely,never sad

Who are you?Do you know I
I am her lover and she is mine
We dream the same sweet dream
Have all day ,not dark night

Who are you?Do you know I
I am her lover and she is mine
Planted seeds in our hearts early time
It must  bloom beautiful holy love florwer today or tonight


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