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译文最迟2月5日,统计结果需译八万汉字,希望一段一段地写成英文,不希望一句一句地对照译成中式英文。 统计结果需译八万汉字,希望一段一段地写成英文,不希望一句一句地对照译成中式英文。 贴出试译的这段概略介绍性的文章具有代表性而且是全书中翻译难度最大的,能译好此段译其他的就容易了。正文中的推论更多,明确了中文说的是什么后,对英文好的人来说把英语当母语一段一段地往下写就行了,用不着一句一句地对照中文来译,这样译得也快且表达得会更流畅,译文就如同直接用英文写的一样,这是我们的希望。我们不希望一句一句地对译出一篇中国式的英文。 此段文章共1,576汉字占全书需译汉字数的2 %,原先说占1%是统计错了,全书中除掉英文摘要和英文参考文献,真正需要译的绪论、正文和后记共计76,727汉字(包括标题和标点符号),可能要补充点新进展也不会超过八万汉字。 |
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应译者要求公布笫一篇译文请内行评议。 应译者要求公布笫一篇译文请内行评议。 由于我们自己的英文水平不行才要请人译,我们只能看看译文是否表达了中文的原意。至于译得准确否?译文的水平如何?是否符合在英语国家出版的要求?这些我们都判断不了,拜托内行评议,评议意见不便网上发帖的则请发至:chenb1503@126.com或ch503en@163.com。 附译文: According to the general relativity, there are two relativistic effects in the gravitational field: time dilation and space contraction. The time dilation results in a decrease of frequencyυ. The space contraction results in an increase of the wavelength of light. The energy flux density of the light wave decreases with the times of vibration in a unit time (frequency) while decreases with the number of wave (caused by the increase of the wavelength) in a unit volume (unit length for plane homochromatic waves). So, the decrease of energy flux density is the common results of decrease in frequency caused by time dilation and increase in wavelength caused by space contraction. The energy flux density is corresponding to the energy of the photon hv, thus the redshift of light is the common results of time dilation and space contraction. Strict calculation shows that the redshift from decrease of frequency caused by time dilation and the redshift from increase of wavelength caused by space contraction contributes half of the redshift of light (recorded by chemical sensitive spectrum for quantum jumps) respectively. The decrease in frequency and increase in wavelength occur simultaneously. From strict calculation we can see that the ratio of decrease in frequency and the ratio of increase in wavelength are the same. The product of the bothυλ is a constant. So, the speed of light remains the same in the course of the redshift takes place. The time dilation and space contraction are relative to the metric without gravitation. So, the redshift of light is related naturally to a local inertial reference system without gravitation. It’s the redshift from the comparison between the light passes near the sun and the light doesn’t pass near the sun (there is no such a thing can be called as redshift in one coordinate system, because one can never measure the redshift without a reference system). The longer the path the light travels, the more of possibility for it to pass near stars, the bigger of redshift accumulated. This satisfies with the Hubble law. The Hubble law can be explained by general relativity with the gravitational redshift of light or the reddening of photons during their journey. The hypothesis of the Big Band is completely unnecessary. So, the strict solutions of the general relativity had already explained the observed universe completely. There is no any universe expansion or big band in nature. It’s Einstein’s misplay what leads to the hypothesis of the big band. In chapter 1, Origin of Gravitation, we discuss in details how gravitation comes from. This results in a conclusion that gravitation isn’t an independent interaction. Gravitation is only one form of the vacuum polarizational effects of weak interactions, just like the Casimir force caused by the vacuum polarization of electromagnetic interaction. First, we deduce a formula for vacuum polarization pressure as f = G m M(r∕r+v∕c)∕r 2 , based on the isotropy of distribution of neutrinosν0 in the lowest energy state in the physical vacuum, requested by the Pauli exclusion principle. Then, we deduced the metric equation of the general relativity and the equivalence principle according to this formula. Further, we demonstrate that this vacuum polarization pressure is the gravitation in general meaning. Gravitation is a statistic average result of the weak interaction of neutrinoν0 and nucleons with the boson Z0. Among the four interactions known in nature, only strong interaction, weak interaction and electromagnetic interaction are independent force. The present U(1)×SU(2)×SU(3) model has already unified the four forces in nature. In chapter 2, Quantum Gravitational Effect, we discuss the theoretical prediction of the unconservation of energy under gravitational force and its experimental and observational tests. The source of non-return time elapse was found. Then we discuss the shield effect, temperature effect and speed dependency of gravitation. These new quantum gravitational effects are in fact couch inside the Einstein’s equation in general relativity. In chapter 3, Route Gravitational Redshift, we first discuss the right definition of the observable gravitational redshift. Then we deduce a formula for the route gravitational redshift from quantum field theory and general relativity. We deduce the statistic Hubble law based on this formula, and calculate the Hubble constant for the route gravitational redshift with the density of luminous mass in cosmos from observations. Compare with the Hubble constant from observations we conclude that the Hubble constant is exactly the route gravitational redshift. The prediction for the route gravitational redshift is consistent with the predictions for the deflection of light and the time dilation of the returned radar wave. In chapter 4, Einstein’s Misplay and the Big Bang, we first analyze the reason why the present recognized formula for the gravitational redshift is the 附被译中文: 根据广义相对论,在引力场中存在钟慢与尺缩两个效应,钟慢使光波的频率 υ 减小,尺缩使光波的波长 λ 增大。光波的能流密度一方面会随单位时间内波振动次数(频率)的减少而减小,另一方面会随单位体积内(对单色平面波就是单位长度内)波的数目的减少(因波长增长)而减小。因此光波的能流密度的减小,是由钟慢引起频率 υ 减小和尺缩引起波长 λ 增大共同作用的结果。由光波的能流密度与光子的能量 hυ 相对应可知,光子频率 υ 减小的红化是由钟慢与尺缩两个效应共同作用的结果。严格计算可得出:钟慢引起的频率 υ 减小的红移和尺缩引起的波长 λ 增大的红移,各对光子频率的红化(由化学感光的量子跃迁过程形成的光谱记彔下来)作一半的贡献。频率减小与波长增大是同时发生的,严格的计算可得出,波长 λ 的增大率跟频率 υ 的减小率相等,两者之积 υλ 恒为一个常数,因此,红移过程光速总是保持不变的。由于钟慢和尺缩都是相对无引力时的度规而言的,光子频率的红化自然也是相对于无引力时的局部惯性系而言的,是光经过太阳附近跟不经过太阳附近相比较而言的红移或红化(一个坐标系中无所谓红移,因为没有参照系就无法测量红移)。经过的路途愈长,从恆星旁边穿过的机会愈多,累积的红移也会愈大,这与哈勃红移定律正好相符。用广义相对论途中光波的引力红移或途中光子的引力红化就可解释哈勃红移,宇宙膨胀的假设完全是多余的。因此,用爱因斯坦的广义相对论严格求解就能完全解释观测到的宇宙,自然界不存在宇宙膨胀和宇宙大爆炸,是爱因斯坦的失误导致了宇宙膨胀的假设。 本书第1章“引力的起源”深入讨论引力是如何产生的,得出引力不是一种独立的作用力,引力只是弱作用力真空极化效应的一种表现形式,它有如电磁作用的真空极化效应的Casimir(卡西米尔)力。首先从泡利 (Pauli) 不相容原理要求的在物理真空中最低能态中微子ν0分布的均匀各向同性出发,推导出真空极化压力公式 f = G m M(r∕r+v∕c)∕r 2 ,然后由此公式推导出广义相对论的度规方程和等效原理,并论证此弱作用力的真空极化压力就是通常意义下的引力。引力只是中微子ν0与核子(或夸克)通过Z0玻色子弱作用的统计平均结果,已知的自然界四种相互作用力只有强、弱、电磁三种作用力是独立的,现有的U(1)×SU(2)×SU(3) 模型就已经实现了四种相互作用力的统一。第2章“量子引力效应”首先讨论引力作用下能量不守恒的理论预言及其实验观测检验,并找到了时间流逝一去不复返的物理根源。接着讨论引力的屏蔽效应、温度效应以及引力对速度的依赖,这些新的量子引力效应实际上已隐含在广义相对论的爱因斯坦方程之中。第3章“途中引力红移”首先讨论可观测的引力红移的正确定义,接着分别从量子场论和广义相对论推导出途中引力红移公式,再由此公式推导出统计意义的哈勃定律,并用实测的宇宙光度质量密度计算出‘途中引力红移’的哈勃常数,并与观测的哈勃常数相比较,得出哈勃红移正是途中引力红移。途中引力红移的预言与光的偏折和雷达回波时延的预言相洽。第4章“爱因斯坦的失误与宇宙膨胀”首先分析现今公认的引力红移公式为什么是牛顿近似的引力红移,再探讨爱因斯坦为何本该预言到却没有预言到途中引力红移以及雷达回波时延的原因。爱因斯坦的这个失误导致了宇宙膨胀假说的产生。第5章“途中引力红移的实验与观测检验”总结了已有的有关引力红移的实验和观测结果,通过分析证明广义相对论的严格引力红移公式已经得到了已有的实验的充分检验,是完全正确的。第6章“真实的宇宙”用量子场论和广义相对论推导出的途中引力红移公式和统计意义的哈勃定律,解释反常红移、哈勃曲线的弥散性、丢失质量、类星体之谜、光度佯僇、微波背景辐射和氦丰度等观察结果。广义相对论的光在传播途中的引力红移预言与观察结果完全一致,从而直接地得出一个和谐统一的、自然的、局域化的宇宙,不需要任何新的理论与假设,也不需要宇宙膨胀和大爆炸的猜想。 |
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晕,这样我也可以抄这篇译文寄给你了。应该同时贴出才公正 除非这篇的译者是本论坛的,否则我就不用出300了。 评价: 有一个小小的笔误? The time dilation results in a decrease of frequencyu. The space contraction results in an increase in the wavelength of light. 是否应该这样更好? The time dilation results in a decrease in(of) frequency(u). The space contraction results in an increase in(of) the wavelength of light. 不过影响不大,似乎是没有核对? 整体水平达标。专业词汇准确,文法没有错误。 |
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big band 应该是big bang 如果不是译者的水平问题就是打字员的水平问题。 ※※※※※※ 黄氏时空由光频多普勒红移定义可变时间单位秒t'=tsquart[(C-V)/(C+V)].时间秒的变化导致了可变光速C'=Csquart[(C-V)/(C+V)].光速的变化导致了可变距离单位米l'=lsquart[(C-V)/(C+V)].黄氏自旋衰变相互作用模型:引力=动量变化率,电磁力=角动量变化率.超光速C=2GM/r |
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可以肯定是打字员的水平有问题。 有意试翻译《谁引爆了宇宙》部分绪论的老师,请在2月2日前发往:chenb1503·126.com ,不管结果怎样,绝对为翻译者保密。 |
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工作热情与工作效率有时成正比。您想投机取巧没门。 有意试翻译《谁引爆了宇宙》部分绪论的老师,请在2月2日前发往:chenb1503·126.com ,不管结果怎样,绝对为翻译者保密。 |
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全文建议修改如下(红字部分)即可 According to the general relativity, there are two relativistic effects in the gravitational field: time dilation and space contraction. The time dilation results in a decrease in frequencyυ. The space contraction results in an increase in the wavelength of light. The energy flux density of the light wave decreases with the times of vibration in a unit time (frequency) while decreases with the number of wave (caused by the increase of the wavelength) in a unit volume (unit length for plane homochromatic waves). So, the decrease of energy flux density is the common results of decrease in frequency caused by time dilation and increase in wavelength caused by space contraction. The energy flux density is corresponding to the energy of the photon hv, thus the redshift of light is the common results of time dilation and space contraction. Strict calculation shows that the redshift from decrease in frequency caused by time dilation and the redshift from increase in wavelength caused by space contraction contributes half of the redshift of light (recorded by chemical sensitive spectrum for quantum jumps) respectively. The decrease in frequency and increase in wavelength occur simultaneously. From strict calculation we can see that the ratio of decrease in frequency and the ratio of increase in wavelength are the same. The product of the bothυλ is a constant. So, the speed of light remains the same in the course of the redshift takes place. The time dilation and space contraction are relative to the metric without gravitation. So, the redshift of light is related naturally to a local inertial reference system without gravitation. It’s the redshift from the comparison between the light passes near the sun and the light doesn’t pass near the sun (there is no such a thing can be called as redshift in one coordinate system, because one can never measure the redshift without a reference system). The longer the path the light travels, the more of possibility for it to pass near stars, the bigger of redshift accumulated. This satisfies with the Hubble law. The Hubble law can be explained by general relativity with the gravitational redshift of light or the reddening of photons during their journey. The hypothesis of the Big Bang is completely unnecessary. So, the strict solutions of the general relativity had already explained the observed universe completely. There is no any universe expansion or big band in nature. It’s Einstein’s misplay(建议改用mistake 或fault.用misplay太严重了点) what leads to the hypothesis of the big bang. In chapter 1, Origin of Gravitation, we discuss in details how gravitation comes from. This results in a conclusion that gravitation isn’t an independent interaction. Gravitation is only one form of the vacuum polarizational effects of weak interactions, just like the Casimir force caused by the vacuum polarization of electromagnetic interaction. First, we deduce a formula for vacuum polarization pressure as f = G m M(r∕r+v∕c)∕r 2 , based on the isotropy of distribution of neutrinosν0 in the lowest energy state in the physical vacuum, requested by the Pauli exclusion principle. Then, we deduced the metric equation of the general relativity and the equivalence principle according to this formula. Further, we demonstrate that this vacuum polarization pressure is the gravitation in general meaning. Gravitation is a statistic average result of the weak interaction of neutrinoν0 and nucleons with the boson Z0. Among the four interactions known in nature, only strong interaction, weak interaction and electromagnetic interaction are independent force. The present U(1)×SU(2)×SU(3) model has already unified the four forces in nature. In chapter 2, Quantum Gravitational Effect, we discuss the theoretical prediction of the unconservation of energy under gravitational force and its experimental and observational tests. The source of non-return time elapse was found. Then we discuss the shield effect, temperature effect and speed dependency of gravitation. These new quantum gravitational effects are in fact couched inside the Einstein’s equation in general relativity. In chapter 3, Route Gravitational Redshift, we first discuss the right definition of the observable gravitational redshift. Then we deduce a formula for the route gravitational redshift from quantum field theory and general relativity. We deduce the statistic Hubble law based on this formula, and calculate the Hubble constant for the route gravitational redshift with the density of luminous mass in cosmos from observations. Compare with the Hubble constant from observations we conclude that the Hubble redshift is exactly the route gravitational redshift. The prediction for the route gravitational redshift is consistent with the predictions for the deflection of light and the time dilation of the returned radar wave. In chapter 4, Einstein’s Misplay and the Big Bang, we first analyze the reason why the present recognized formula for the gravitational redshift is the ※※※※※※ 黄氏时空由光频多普勒红移定义可变时间单位秒t'=tsquart[(C-V)/(C+V)].时间秒的变化导致了可变光速C'=Csquart[(C-V)/(C+V)].光速的变化导致了可变距离单位米l'=lsquart[(C-V)/(C+V)].黄氏自旋衰变相互作用模型:引力=动量变化率,电磁力=角动量变化率.超光速C=2GM/r |
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你小看了这个论坛上的几个吹牛大师的水平 如果你那300是英镑就至少有三个人向你讨要了。如果是....就免谈了。 ※※※※※※ 黄氏时空由光频多普勒红移定义可变时间单位秒t'=tsquart[(C-V)/(C+V)].时间秒的变化导致了可变光速C'=Csquart[(C-V)/(C+V)].光速的变化导致了可变距离单位米l'=lsquart[(C-V)/(C+V)].黄氏自旋衰变相互作用模型:引力=动量变化率,电磁力=角动量变化率.超光速C=2GM/r |
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回复:由于您的建议,您也是入围者。 有意试翻译《谁引爆了宇宙》部分绪论的老师,请在2月2日前发往:chenb1503·126.com ,不管结果怎样,绝对为翻译者保密。 |
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懂英文的人还不少呀 感觉不错呀,只是匆忙了点呀,存在点小问题,可打95分。看流星和宇观都改了,改后可打97分。 我不是行家,只是感觉还通顺。 想不到这蝌蚪文比中文还多出了许多,还是中文简练,哈哈,老外学中文就好了。 |