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七言古诗__酒里乾坤天地宽
[楼主] 作者:hmw1947  发表时间:2009/11/04 17:15
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酒里乾坤天地宽

十五夜,寄友人

  

君居江南吾江北

举杯共饮天上月

吾居江北君江南

长醉直到东方白

我愿长醉不愿醒                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         

醒了何处藏心魄

酒里滔滔有大江

酒里巍巍有山阙

酒里青松挺且直

酒里寒梅傲霜雪

酒里长剑鸣有声

酒里文章鬼魅怯

酒里恶竹斩万杆

酒里奸佞倾覆灭

酒里有肝胆

酒里有气节

酒里有白眼

酒里有情热

酒里有我秦汉唐

酒里有我大中国

酒里乾坤天地宽

醉了眼睛心明白

 
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 [2楼]  作者:飘尘永魂  发表时间: 2009/11/04 19:59 

华夏文明

神州兴盛

沉醉杜康

忧患难解



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十年一觉梦西洋
 [3楼]  作者:长风起兮  发表时间: 2009/11/05 07:51 

换将上好酒~
 [4楼]  作者:梦里思雨  发表时间: 2009/11/05 10:31 

醉了眼睛心明白~
偶看了都有点醉了(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
现代人都爱上写古诗了\(^o^)/~

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常在月光下独踯 喜欢在窗前听雨 思念如柔柔月光 思念是绵绵细雨 静静地想你.....
 [5楼]  作者:绿筱媚清涟  发表时间: 2009/11/05 11:27 

尽在酒中
感觉此文不太像古诗
可能是我酒醉了.呵
问好1947
[楼主]  [6楼]  作者:hmw1947  发表时间: 2009/11/05 14:31 

谢谢诸位文友的阅读和评说.清莲文友说好象不是古诗,其实就不是古诗,是跟大家开个玩笑,开大了哈!哈哈哈.
其实我是不喝酒的,有朋友来,也喝不多,喝酒的气氛和感觉是我凭空想象的,飘尘文友说:沉醉杜康,忧患难解,是不是劝我少喝点酒哟?可见飘尘文友的性情热肠,以后我就不唱了嘛,只在诗里和文章中还喝,哈哈,开玩笑了.

谢谢大家
 [7楼]  作者:长河拾尘  发表时间: 2009/11/05 22:10 

酒里有我秦汉唐

酒里有我大中国

酒里乾坤天地宽

醉了眼睛心明白


酒之大解!问兄弟好!!!

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