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借z老师“To the person who is faraway(致远人)”诗意,作打油一首
[楼主] 作者:阿娅然  发表时间:2004/06/18 11:00
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日出光熠熠,月上波柔柔,

朝朝与暮暮,相思可曾休。

星寒河汉渺,风吟柳梢头。

应知千里外,君愁似我愁。

白驹指间过,心向天际游。

瀑落青丝秀,秋水点明眸。

谁家歌夜起,惊梦泪难收。

却是旧时曲,昨日焉可留?

东方天欲晓,紫光染芳洲,

君心若依旧,天涯共漂流。

附z老师原诗:

To the person who is faraway(致远人)
BY: ZKOCT
From the sun was shining
Till the moon is smiling.
All I could do, baby,
Was walking and thinking.
And now the stars are twinkling,
The breeze is singing.
The only thing I wonder is
What you are engaging.
Time silently passing by,
I am still here under sky.
But my heart is not here,
To the far end I felt it fly and fly.
I can't live happy without your care,
Too many things I need you share.
Come here in to my dreams, honey,
My hands hungered a touch to your lovely hair.
A song suddenly comes to my ears
At the same time comes my tears.
"And time goes by so slowly......"
Something really touched my tenderness.
Every minute with you comes to my mind,
your laughing does sweetly sound.
The vessel of our life arrived midway islands now
The rest way I hope we can go together hand in hand.
The sun is rising again
A new day and a new me begin.
Distance is not so difficult to cross,
If only your heart still welcomes me to come in.

 

 



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 [2楼]  作者:zkoct  发表时间: 2004/06/18 17:17 

回复:老阿啊
你大可不必附上俺那破诗的。老阿的这首诗,显然有十九首遗韵,自该加精。声明:可不是因为俺那旧诗啊!

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